Great idea and scene and very, very attractive, whatever else. Beautiful scene and well spotted. I want to shout "shoot a little lower!" but I guess it's too late now? :) As it is, did you try cropping from the top to divide it more evenly into thirds. For me, that looks really good.
Thanks for your comments Paul. This is pretty well full frame so no cropping. If I could do it over again I would have zoomed out more. Live & learn :)