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    Default Abstract - Venice Egret

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    This abstract image is of a Egret pruning, while watching her chick sleep on the nest. It was previously shown in another less abstract version. It was taken at Venice Rookery last year.

    Modification included; Poster Edge, Cutout, Reticulation and Colored Spotlights.

    Enjoy!

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    Like the pose and the effects you have used hear Mark, might up the blacks in selective colour or levels to make the bird stand out a bit more.

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    Another nice graphic art abstract, Mark. Nice effect. Agree with Jackie on increasing the black a bit to make the bird stand out. Very nice work.

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    Love the colors and the composition, Mark. Great filtering work! :)

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    Interesting work, choice of colors...well done,

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    Thanks for viewing and comments. Appreciate it.

    Here is a revised image, based on comments.

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    Mark, I like the original post. The abstract look is very nice and the vertical framing is a nice touch.

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    Mark, I think I like the original best also. I love the graphic look to this.:) It has a very nice gentle feel to it.
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    Thanks Denise and Cheryl for viewing and comments. Appreciate it.

    I agree with the first post being better. But appreciate all visions also.

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