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    Connie Mier
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    Shot on Biscayne Bay last summer (feeling nostalgic for heat and humidity!).
    Sony a700, 70-400mm @ 300mm
    1/1000, f10, ISO320, backlit
    Post processing, I moved the flying gull to the left a bit.
    Thank you for looking
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    Connie:

    Very fun. Like them swimming, perching and flying.

    Just for fun, I might consider cloning out the empty post that touches the commorants outstretched wing on the left. I really like the fact that each post has a bird, and removing the empty post would simplify the image and strengthen that feel. I know there are a couple of other small overlapping posts without birds, but that is the one that jumps out at me.

    This is a fun one to play with re: composition.

    Thanks so much for sharing!

    Randy

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    Thanks Randy! I didn't think about that, but I'll try removing that one post. Good idea from you, as always.

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    Connie:
    I did try a quick and dirty removal of the post, and I believe it is stronger, cleaner looking.

    The image also gives lots of options for adjusting the tonality, great fun.

    Cheers

    Randy

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    What heat and Humidity at biscayne bay I was ther 2 weeks ago and it was cool :D

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    I like the artistic viewpoint here. There are actually a couple pictures within this one that would be pretty neat to see. I would try a long pano crop of the four on the right. I like it as is, but there's a lot to play with!
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    A really nice photo and a good idea. Good for you to see it.
    I like the monochrome look to it.

    Dave

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    A simplistic image which has greatpower . Almost a sepia , but there is something in this image , which draws me to it . TFS .

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    Like above comments - I am really drawn to this image. The crop (?assumed) is well done.
    Simple and artistic have been used to describe the photo and I agree with these terms also.
    I don't really mind the one post.

    Really nice.
    Deb

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    Work of art. very painterly. really really liked it. What I like best about it is that each bird is doing his own thing.....gives a feel of "freedom" to it. The empty space and bright BG goes well with that. 'well seen' would be an understatement.

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