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    Hi Everyone,
    I'm not sure how effective this looks on a screen but I quite like it as a print. My husband was not so sure...:eek:
    What do you think? :)
    I took this image of a black skimmer in Florida a few weeks ago. It was taken in colour and converted to black and white. I took the cyan and blue sliders to the right and then painted out a couple of remaining patches. The light was almost gone, so the bird was already blurred.
    Look forward to your thoughts!
    Best regards to all,
    Nicki
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    Nicki, I love the look you have produced here. I would have put the bird more to the right but this is interesting as presented. A very nice abstract!:)

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    Nice creativity Nicki! I agree with Denise, moving the bird to the right seems to make conventional sense. I really like that the wings are "chinese brush stroke", bamboo leaf strokes to my eye!

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    Denise and Dan, thanks so much - I'll tell my husband what you have said!!! :D
    I'll look at it for a while and decide where the bird needs to be placed. Dan, I can see why this reminds you of a Chinese brush stroke painting!
    Best regards,
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    If that beak weren't there I'd think you had lost your mind but that instantly says "skimmer" to me. GREAT abstract, Nicki!

    BTW, how did the show go? With the b&w bird images?

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    You always have interesting POV's Nicki. Good for inspiration (for me anyways). Like the abstract and agree with D about the placement.

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    Very interesting image, Nicki. Personally I think I'd prefer a little more detail, but not a lot more. I really like the brush stroke look to the skimmer. Ditto on the placement.
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    Hi Jules, Jackie and Christopher,
    Thanks so much for your very kind comments - Jules, I think my husband thought that I had lost my mind...:eek::D
    The show went well, thanks :)

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    Nicki,

    Greetings. I really like this... black watercolor brush strokes ... just add a red stamp (as in Japanese or Chinese calligraphy)... I also like how the form is suggestive of a fish.

    Cheers,

    -Michael-

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    Simply lovely Nicki! I would love to see it with the subject moved up and right a bit, but as Mark says - "your vision". :) Agree that the addition of a "chop" would put this over the top!!
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    Hi Michael and Kerry,
    Thanks so much for your very kind words, and yes, I agree that it needs to be moved up and right in the frame. Great idea about the chop - now where's Dan Brown when I need him...:D
    Best regards,
    Nicki

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    Hey Nicki, here I am:D. Had fun with this!

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    Hey Dan, great to hear from you and thanks so much for taking the time to do the chop...:)
    Where can I learn to do this - it looks REALLY cool :D
    Hope that all is really well with you!
    Best regards,
    Nicki

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