GBH juvi

[WIlliam Maroldo]

SonyA700~Sony70-400G@300mm~ISO400~F8~1/1250 sec~manual exposure~Hand Held~2-17-2010~Flood Control Reservoir, Houston, Texas~CS4/ Redfield Fractalius
comments and critique welcomed. regards~Bill

[Arthur Morris]

I love your soft touch with the Fract especially on the watery BKGR. As you probably know I would prefer a looser framing :) especially left and top. You must be from the RS-OC (Roman-School of Composition). If you are into clean-up you might wish to lose the vertical stalk that intersects the base of the beak.

Any clues as to your starting pre-set in Fract?

[denise ippolito]

Bill, Another beautifully rendered Frac. image. I love the water and the pose. Maybe a bit tight on top and a tiny bit more room on left.

[Christopher Miller]

Hi Bill, Lovely soft colors and effect. Like the pose and BG. I agree with Artie and Denise on the comp being a bit tight.

[Julie Kenward]

For me, it's the cut off head in the reflection that bothers me on this one. The fract work is beautiful as always but that head chop...that looks like its got to hurt!