Beautiful light and water, great pose and head angle, and nice comp!
Bill looks like it might be beyond recovery but it's worth a try.
Blacks also look a bit washed out, maybe more contrast or higher black point in Levels?
Agree with the self critique on the bill and it looks as though you could have gone with less exposure and done better with the black as well.
Really like the pose and the evening colors of the water.
It almost looks as though the feather detail could have taken a bit more sharpening and I would have cloned out the couple of blue orbs (reflections) above the birds back to the left.