Allan, a great looking subject in a classic pose makes this a good shot but it looks a little dark to me. The eye is too close to the center for my tastes but I guess that not so bad with a square crop.
I'm on my work monitor but it does feel a slight bit dark to me. And, yes, the eye is more "centered" but what else could you do? The hands and feet certainly determine the frame placement here and I think you did a good job of finding what "works." Love that you caught a catchlight in the upper corner of his eye. Nice!
Hey Allen, I like the pose and a great looking mug, being a full depth of field kind of guy, I would have liked to seen more details in the background. Not to say it doesn'r work as is, just my personal taste.
Love the pose, the splayed toes, and the head turn, Allen. I agree that the whole image looks a bit dark to me and maybe a little more saturation would pop the greens. If this was mine, I would clone a lot of the flash-generated specular highlights and the second catchlight. I think you have the makings of a winner here. :)