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    It look a bit soft to me around the eye. I like the pose though and the OOF background works well.

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    ISO1600, interesting Tom;)

    I like the pose and ruffled throat feathers which kind of echo his calling and different to the norm. You have been clever in not over shapening it, as coupled with the high ISO it would have given you issues I fear. Is there any more room above, as perhaps a portrait crop might suit, based on the pose as the OOF branch isn't really working for me. I quite like the 'dappled' BG, but be careful with the white areas.

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    Very nice photo. I like the nice moment well captured. BG and habitat look very good to me and only negative is the bit of hidden tail. Dave

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    Hi Tom, Really nice pose and detail on the Robin. I think you could make the image stronger if you lighten the eye and idi some selective sharpening on it and i would also tone down the BG especially the white areas behind the Robin
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    Love the singing pose with ruffled throat feathers, Tom. Looks to have a greenish cast - how does this version look?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Oscar Dewhurst View Post
    It look a bit soft to me around the eye. I like the pose though and the OOF background works well.

    Oscar
    Thank you Oscar for your comments.

    Tom

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    Quote Originally Posted by Steve Kaluski View Post
    ISO1600, interesting Tom;)

    I like the pose and ruffled throat feathers which kind of echo his calling and different to the norm. You have been clever in not over shapening it, as coupled with the high ISO it would have given you issues I fear. Is there any more room above, as perhaps a portrait crop might suit, based on the pose as the OOF branch isn't really working for me. I quite like the 'dappled' BG, but be careful with the white areas.

    Steve
    Thanks for your comments Steve - this is virtually uncropped and there is no more space above available.

    Tom

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dave Leroy View Post
    Very nice photo. I like the nice moment well captured. BG and habitat look very good to me and only negative is the bit of hidden tail. Dave
    Thank you Dave for your comments - agree about the tail tip but then that would have been the ideal and as you know wildlife never reads the script and land where you want them :D

    Tom

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    Quote Originally Posted by Don Lacy View Post
    Hi Tom, Really nice pose and detail on the Robin. I think you could make the image stronger if you lighten the eye and idi some selective sharpening on it and i would also tone down the BG especially the white areas behind the Robin
    Thanks for commenting Don - appreciate your suggestions and will look into that.

    Tom

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    Quote Originally Posted by Tony Whitehead View Post
    Love the singing pose with ruffled throat feathers, Tom. Looks to have a greenish cast - how does this version look?
    Thanks for your comments Tony and your edit. The Robin was shot actually within the tree and therefore I feel that my edit is more correct. If it had been more to the outside of the tree and therefore in clearer light I would say that the tones on your edit would be more representative. A case of personal taste really.

    Tom

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