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    Garry McCarthy
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    California Brown Pelican; La Jolla, California
    Nikon D300 with Nikkor 300mm f/4D ED-IF; f/8; 1/1000; ISO: 200.

    PP: Rotated image and filled in BG, minor sharpening and color-correction. Thanks for any comments.

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    DanielTMiller
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    Amazing detail in the feathers, and the eye contact is great, beautiful portrait.

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    I love the pose and awesome details...great job on that. Only thing is that I feel the comp is a little unbalanced...IMO shifting your lens a bit more to the left would have given you a better comp with needed room in front of the bill, even if that meant part the right wing going out of the frame.

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    Axel Hildebrandt
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    Sharpness, eye contact and BG look very good. If you have more room on the left, I would put the bird further to the right in the frame. I see a slight reddish cast on my monitor.

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    Garry McCarthy
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    Thank you for the critiques; they're much appreciated!

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