Results 1 to 15 of 15

Thread: Ram B/W

  1. #1
    Todd Frost
    Guest

    Default Ram B/W

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    Something a little different, see what you think.
    D300, 400 2.8, 1/4000, f8, iso400, man exp.
    Thanks for looking, comments and critiques appreciated.
    Todd

  2. #2
    Lifetime Member Marc Mol's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2008
    Location
    Somewhere else in the World
    Posts
    4,797
    Threads
    708
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    The curve and detail in the horn makes this one Todd. Not so sure about the blurred FG?
    TFS


  3. #3
    Todd Frost
    Guest

    Default

    Thanks Marc, foreground was a snow bank, not much that could be done with it. Liked the over shoulder look.
    Todd

  4. #4
    Lifetime Member Marc Mol's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2008
    Location
    Somewhere else in the World
    Posts
    4,797
    Threads
    708
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Quote Originally Posted by Todd Frost View Post
    Liked the over shoulder look.
    Yes, me too.


  5. #5
    Wildlife Moderator Steve Kaluski's Avatar
    Join Date
    Nov 2009
    Location
    Somewhere in the world
    Posts
    20,562
    Threads
    1,286
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Hi Todd, yes different from recent postings.

    I would try to blend the BG more especially as there seems to be a 'white' hotspot to the left of the head. Might also have another try with curves as I think it needs a tad more 'punch';)

    At 1/4000 I think the ISO could have dropped but guess that's your default setting?:)

    Steve
    Post Production: It’s ALL about what you do with the tools and not, which brand of tool you use.

  6. #6
    BPN Viewer
    Join Date
    Jan 2008
    Location
    New Delhii, India
    Posts
    3,690
    Threads
    269
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Nice image. I agree with Steve regarding the background and the ISO. Some more light on the eyes would have been great as well. Thanks for sharing.

    Cheers,
    Sabyasachi

  7. #7
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Feb 2008
    Location
    George, South Africa
    Posts
    1,462
    Threads
    255
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    Hi Todd , sorry I just could not help myself , lovely image , I just thought there was tooo many distractions in FG and BKG.

  8. #8
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Dec 2007
    Location
    Cody, WY
    Posts
    2,491
    Threads
    428
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Interesting treatment of the image.. The B&W works well. Don't mind the 1st version. Face of the ram seemed a bit dark.

  9. #9
    Todd Frost
    Guest

    Default

    Thanks for the comments. Peter your repost pushes to the extreme, don't normally go that far but you have shown the effect well. Will look at the extreme more often with my artistic conversions in the future. Thanks for the nice reminder.
    Todd

  10. #10
    DanWalters
    Guest

    Default

    The BW works really well with this ram. The second version really gives it a artistic look.

  11. #11
    BPN Member Morkel Erasmus's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2009
    Location
    South Africa
    Posts
    14,858
    Threads
    1,235
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    lovely composition and perspective here. I think Peter's repost rocks!
    Morkel Erasmus

    WEBSITE


  12. #12
    Lifetime Member Stu Bowie's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Location
    Centurion, South Africa
    Posts
    21,360
    Threads
    1,435
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Todd, you certainly captured great sharp detail on the head and horns. On my monitor, a tad more exposure on the head, and would leave the rest as is.

  13. #13
    BPN Viewer
    Join Date
    Oct 2008
    Location
    Washington, D.C.
    Posts
    1,225
    Threads
    14
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    That gaze over the shoulder really makes this image ... along with the fine details in the head.

    I like the sense of habitat in the background but find the transitions between light and dark areas
    just a little distracting. I would tone that down some, leaving just a hint of what's there now,
    and selectively enhance the head a little. Very fine capture!


  14. #14
    BPN Viewer Steve Canuel's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2008
    Posts
    5,444
    Threads
    444
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Works for me. I like David's cleanup of the BG. Also like Peter's approach.

  15. #15
    Todd Frost
    Guest

    Default

    Thanks for the comments and reposts everyone. Much appreciated.
    Todd

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
Web Analytics