I like the wing position in this one even better than in the previous post. Eye contact and sharpness look good, too, and I would tone down the whites on the neck a bit more.
Wow, Denise was right. I like this one way better. Have never seen such a killer view of the upper wing detail on this species. You were on your game that day. And so, so sharp. A bit more room in front of the bird would be great (if you have it).
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Awesome work! My only suggestion is to tone down the white on the neck. Composition looks fine to me - would not add room in front of the bird. If anything maybe just a bit off the top to get a more 2:3 ratio.