I love the intense color and the great wing position. The image is a tad soft as presented; I might have traded some DOF for more shutter speed. Also I'd add a bit of canvas on the top and left.
colors, wings position and light are beautiful.
The first image is soft and the second one is oversharpened.
Did some work as been done on the LLC BG and the right side of his tail?
Pose and wing position look great and I agree with Doug on higher shutter speed and narrower DOF, maybe f/7.1 or 8 to get to 1/1600 or 1/2000 since these birds seem to fly very fast.
Loukie your original post is better than the repost since there are multiple artifacts in the BG on the repost and the bird is a tad oversharpened. exposure and comp are great, the bird is just a little soft due to motion blur. I would take the original and only slightly sharpen the bird as a whole and then selectively sharpen the head and eye some more.