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    Leander Khil
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    Default Bramblings are here



    Brambling
    Fringilla montifringilla 21.1.2010

    Nikon D300, 500/4 AF-S, ISO 200, f6.3, 1/320, fill-flash

    Please feel free to comment and critique!
    Last edited by Leander Khil; 01-23-2010 at 03:44 PM. Reason: Tried to add the missing "s" in the title, but that's apparently not possible.

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    I love them, always a joy seeing them.
    I like the BG, perch and the open beak.
    The image as a glassy look, maybe its the strong flash with the sharpening.

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    Welcome on board Leander. And what a start! lovely bird and image. Fill flash revealed the feather details great in here.

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    Good-looking specimen, eye contact, angle and BG. I might sharpen a bit less, give it a bit more room and it looks a bit overflashed as presented. Thanks for sharing!

    P.S.: I added the 's' in the title.

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    Beautiful shot.I like the open bill. Very good BG. Good sharpness. I agree with Axel on it looking a little bid overflashed. But only a tiny little bit.

    Markus

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    Beautiful bird! Great detail and exposure.

    Mark

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    Leander:

    Nice bird, agree about the over flashed comments.

    You might try about -1/3 on the exposure overall, put the perch on an adjustment layer and with curves bring it down even further, painting in with a soft brush to taste. I tried it, seems more natural to me.

    Cheers

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    Thanks a lot for all your constructive comments! I really appreciate it.
    I processed it again, considering most of your points (toned down with curves, a little less sharpening)

    What about this one? Does it still look over-flashed?

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    Leander:

    IMO, a significant improvement. The perch can still go darker for my tastes, but the repost is certainly better.

    Cheers

    Randy

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    repost works well! I would also look at lightening the beak a bit to keep it from blending in with the BG. pretty bird!
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