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    Default Young and Angry

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    He just droped a fish.

    LeClair Ia Lock and Dam 14
    very cloudy grey day - poor light
    Canon 1D Mk IV 1/640 ISO 1000 500mm
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    Looks good to me...pose and details ! Particularly like the details in the white tail feathers. I likely would try to do something to the head to make it more visible though...brighten the area around the eye, for example. Probably it's my monitor but I also think it could use a bit more sharpening. Oh, I wonder if you could add a bit more space at the top :)

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    Hi Dale,
    I like the flight angle with the tight banking position going after the fish again. You have good feather details and good color rendition. The high-key makes him pop out at you...agree with Desmond on a tad more room at the top and the bottom. Also the eye can be lightened a little and selective sharpened more...excellent capture...:cool:

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    Very strong graphical power in this image Dale. I really like this kind of images with white BG, soft light and good exposure on the bird. The intense stare of the eagle is killer. I think that some CCW rotation to reinforce the diagonla composition would begreat. Very good job!

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    Lance Peters
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    HI Dale - lots to like here thats for sure - love the high key.
    And think Juan's rotation would put this over the top. Might lighten the eye area a tad.
    Good show :)

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