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    Howdy!

    I created this image this past December on the South African West Coast.

    All critique and comments welcome! Enjoy the weekend everybody!

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    Nice composition with the pebble and shell base and the surf background.
    Exposure looks good and the over the shoulder look works well here.

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    Lovely light and comp here Morkel. Like the shell/stone base to the image. Would love to see the feet, but thats minor. Super stuff!

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    Love the pose and BG Mork. I would love to see a bit more foreground mate. just a little tight this way me thinks. Did you crop from the bottom?

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    thanks Akos, Mark & Leo.

    Akos - unfortunately that is the bottom of the frame. :)
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    Nice comp and pose. I too would like a little more foreground but if you don't have it this will have to do. Great thing about all these comments and critiques of our images is it always gives us a reason to go back:). TFS
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    Exposure looks good, and your angle works well, to get him against the surf BG. Well captured mate.

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    appreciate the feedback, Stu & Todd!
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    Very well composed. Handsome dude too. Good that you got the beak against a lighter shade of blue. Nice yellow-blue contrast there.

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    thank you Kaustubh
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    Nice composition with surf in bg, the gull and the gravel/shell beach. Nice look back pose and also nice details in blacks also. Well done. Dave

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    It came out very nice, Morkel, Like the small FG, it works for me, and the shell details are not overpowering.

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    thanks Dave & Callie...
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