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    another one from from last summer. This is already a 70% crop so did not want to crop it further. Plus I rather like the impressionist-style BG. Your typical 'texas-in-May' meadow. With this type of comp, placement of bird in the frame becomes more important and tricky. So let me know what you think on that front.

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    Such a pretty shot Kaustubh I really like the composition.

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    beautiful pose,eye contact..colors

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    I like the wide crop, head angle and particularly the flowers in the BG and might sharpen the bird a tad more.

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    I like the space in this, although I would take a slither off the RHS. Lovely pose, and I like the hint of the yellow flowers across the BG.

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    If you could go a tiny bit tighter... but still lovely with the meadow.
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    I can see why you wanted to keep the lovely Texas meadow. I like the comp as is, but I could imagine just a tiny bit off the bottom and the right. Beautiful image.

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    Thx for the comments everyone. I wont take credit for the wider crop though :-) If I had a longer lens or could have approached the bird successfully, I would have taken a tighter shot for sure. Approaching them in an open meadow is not easy.

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    Looks great Kaustubh! Really good comp. Perhaps a bit more off the right for me too! Wonderful pose and colors overall.

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    I like this one a lot. I would not crop anything from the bottom -- I like the OOF sunflowers too much.

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