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    D70s 70-200VR@200 1/1000 f/8.0 ISO400 -2/3EV handheld

    One more in this motif, with its very busy background, before I move on. It is storming here in Southern California, so this week's bird photography opportunities do not look promising. This image from two weeks ago was cropped just a sliver on the bottom and on its left side (to balance the wingspread display -- I had no more image to work with on the right). Then in PS Elements I applied S/H and USM, a bit of brightening on the eyes, as well as cloned out one branch that intersected the heron's body near its leg. All C&C really appreciated.

    Wendell

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    hi wendell - love that wingspread - nice detail there as well.
    Find it a little one dimensional and thus not enough separation from the BG.
    could just be my personal tastes - lets see what others think.

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    Hi Wendell,
    I like the capture with the raised, stretched wing spread. You have good details...I agree with Mr. Peters on the separation factor...might also add that perhaps you can set your whit and black points in order to bring out the vibrant colors and a little more contrast on your subject...it looks a little washed out...re-work and repost, would like to see it...:):cool:

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    Hi Gus:

    Here is a re-post with black, gray and white points set. I hope it looks better; I think it does. What do you think? Appreciate your critiques!

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    Wendell

    I like the repost but it might help to desaturate the dark blue water under the birds left wing.

    Since there are bad conditions for birds you could take pictures of the tornado's. Are you and family ok and also is your property ok?

    Bill

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    Think you're right about the water, Bill . . . I will do . . . Yes, we are fine, but I don't remember a worse storm in this area . . .

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    I perfer the second post the heron is more vibrant and I would agree to desat the water slightly

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    Much better Wendell, would take care of the blue cast on the bottom of the bird's left wing...aside from this, good show...:cool:

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    I think with the water addressed that this'll be a much better rendition.

    The pose is killer and lots of detail showing.

    I know that you worked on the eye, but it's still kind of lost for me and the weakest part of this image, particularly given how the other details pop. Unfortunately, I have no suggestion for a cure.

    Dave

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    Hi Wendell not sure how it got there but color changed with the re post, setting the white/black should not affect at all?

    For the original post try adding some neutral and black in selective color, will make the change !!!

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    Hi Alfred:

    I don't know how to do this (in PS Elements):

    "For the original post try adding some neutral and black in selective color, will make the change !!!"

    And since I've seen you offer this advice regarding more than one image in the past, perhaps you will explain the steps for me -- maybe the explanation would be useful to others, as well.

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