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    Default Red Tailed Hawk (different technique)

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    Used my usual technique for the same bird as last post(different pose).
    I could have cloned out some, or most, of the branches, but they seemed to form a frame(sort of) and didn't seem too distracting.
    comments and critique welcomed. regards~Bill

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    Bill, I love your usual technique and it looks great here. I too think that the branches frame the bird nicely. Very nice pose and eye contact. Color toning and pale blue sky BG are nice.

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    Nice image and application Bill.

    Like the off center placement, I'm not one for centering the birds.

    Not a major problem with the branches, as Denise noted. I might just clip the larger branch off the bottom branch at the left border to bring it into the frame, but not a need. Just seems that maybe it would do something to the image. I wouldn't remove it, just trim it a little. But ...

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    Beautiful work on the bird, Bill - the detail is sharp without being overdone. I could stare at it for a very long time. I also like the branches that form the frame...might consider taking off the small ones that are near the tail if that's possible but I'd leave the rest.

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    Bill, I really love this. The lighting is very, very nice. I agree with Julie on evicting the lower branch by the
    tail. I like the arching branch that helps frame the bird.:)
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    Bill this is awesome..If I didn't know you created it, I swear it was a Bateman...removing a few branches would help...but very nice effect

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    wow, this sings.. the details pop right off the page and I really love the soft colors here. Beautiful image Bill :)

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