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    Default Female House Wren

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    50D, 400 on a 100-400, 1/1250, iso 320.

    Shot yesterday when we finally had a good day to get outside.

    All C and C appreciated. Thanks, Gary.

    OOPs, House Finch, so sorry had Wren on my brain!
    Last edited by Gary Esman; 01-03-2010 at 08:36 PM.

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    Nice BG, exposure, and sharpness. The HA would be better if the head was turned towards us just a bit more. Did you cut off a branch below the tail?

    P.S. This is a House Finch

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    I guess you meant finch not wren:)
    In any case very nice wintery feel on this image.
    Like the bird pose, feather detail and perch.
    Very nice image of this "common" bird.

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    Nice details and BG in this image. Well done.

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    Nice fluffed up pose the bg looks great and I like your choice of composition it works great. Well Done!

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    Nice looking Finch, well composed only needs just a tad more head turn.
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    Nice detail and exposure. I like the fluffed pose, telling me it is cold out there. TFS - I've never seen this LBJ.

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    Very nice shot...composed well, great BG, decent HA. Very good techs, sharp/detailed. I think whats losing it for me is that it is side or even back lit, leaving the head/breast in shadow. A nice front lighting would really make it pop IMO.

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    Gary:

    Sharp, nice scale to perch,angle in frame good for me.

    I do agree it is a bit dark for my tastes.

    I did a minor adjustment, brought the image up about 2/3 of a stop, but thought the sky then too bright, so did a curves adjustment, filled mask with black, used large soft brush and painted with white over parts of the sky to rebalance the image.

    Lots of options here.

    Cheers

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    Thank you for all the comments. Randy I like the repost you did for the bird, but my background. I finally had time to set up a blind in the backyard. Trying to dial in the better beamer now


    Nice BG, exposure, and sharpness. The HA would be better if the head was turned towards us just a bit more. Did you cut off a branch below the tail? No branches were cloned out .

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