Yea that white band is distructing. Also wish he was looking a bit lower, at you. Other then that love the image. Love the colors, sharpness. Thanx for sharing.
An interesting pose Jim and showing great feather detail, not to mention those eyes!!! Yes pity about the light band behind the head but not alot you could have done under the circumstances.
Jim, the whole thing looks very light to me, like it could use some black on the neutrals in Selective color and I think you could try and use the Burn Tool in the white band, choose highlight and go about 10% opacity, many times, it should reduce the impact of the white. Great job on the foot surgery ;)