Composition is perfect. Fitting vertical frame with just enough space around.
Subject pose is wonderful too. Wish there was a better eye contact (Asking for too much I guess :))
I see some noise in the background, may be some noise reduction on background.
Head looks little over sharpened too.
Banking pose, sharpness and BG look very good. I would tone down the whites on the head. I'm not familiar with the species but the plumage looks a bit oversaturated on my monitor. If the BG were a bit lighter, it would give you better separation between wing tips and background.
This is obviously a spectacular pose by a spectacular species. I am with Mr. Axel; though I too do not know the bird the orange of the wings definitely looks over-saturated. And the image quality in the area of the head looks quite funky; did you have some problems there? (There is not much detail in the top of the head, the eye, and the far nape among other spots...)
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