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    A pack of geese getting ready to come in for a landing.

    400mm @ f/6.3 1/2,000 and 640 ISO. +1.3 ev

    All feedback appreciated and welcomed!

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    Hi Mark
    I like the non-traditional composition of incoming geese, it may be a bit tight? Overall I think you did a great job on the exposure - tough with black and white, and bright sky. I sharpened the image a bit in USM and then even less in Smart Sharpen.
    Really nice image - I'd print and frame it.
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    Interesting and wonderful composition. Great exposure. Could use a bit of sharpening. The lead and the fourth are kind of looking at ya!!

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    Hi Mark - a different composition - but I do like it. OP was certainly soft and Gails repost has improved it dramatically - Nice work Gail!!
    A little bit tight on the RHS for my tastes.
    Good show :)

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    I like it, Gail. Agree with comments above. I love how those 2 geese are checking you out!

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    I really like this image... the two geese looking at the viewer/camera really sets it off. Gail's rework made it sing.
    Last edited by Bob Decker; 01-02-2010 at 08:05 PM.

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    Hi Mark,
    I like this vertical capture, the repost improves it. All techs. covered and sound advise given...looking forward to your next one...:cool:

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    Awesome Gail! It seems to be only a matter of time until I have to pop for - and learn - CS4!

    I PP in Aperture and used Nik Sharpener Pro. I really struggle with knowing how sharp is sharp and how much is "too" sharp.

    I did another round in Sharpener Pro - any improvement from my original post?

    Thanks!
    Mark

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    Love the composition, well done.

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