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    I'm really not sure what to do with this one, or if it's even worth the effort. I like the detail and sharpness in the GBH. I also like how the low setting sun filtering through the trees almost put his head in a spotlight. But the environment seems very distracting to me. I tried a portrait photography trick by adding a vignette and blur around the bird to help isolate the subject and did some additional burning of the highlights. 40D, Bigma @ 500mm, iso 800, f/9.0, 1/200, carbon fiber tripod with side-mount gimbal with camera position near subject level. Thoughts... suggestions?
    Last edited by Bob Decker; 12-31-2009 at 10:38 AM.

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    Bob, I think this is well worth working on, I tried more of a vignette and a bit more sharpening around the head. Also, a bit more room around the bird would be nice, especially on the left.

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    William Malacarne
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    Bob

    I like it, as Jackie says maybe more room for him to look into, and maybe desat the whites some on the head.

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    Nonda Surratt
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    Its sharp in habitat and certainly worth the effort. Would tone down the white on the face, maybe the whole head.

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    He's beautiful and I like having seeing the birds in their natural settings, except if it's a really tight shot. Anyway, I agree with most of the above comments. Mostly, just tone down the whites in the head.

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    Based on the above comments I reduced the brightness in the whites on his head, increased room on the LH side (all I have in the original image), did some selective sharpening to the head and went heavier with the vignette/blur action. Yes... no... maybe?

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    I think it looks good but would back off on the vignetting a bit.

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    Hi Bob,
    The repost is much better, I like it very much...wishing you and your family a Happy New Year...:cool:

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    Lance Peters
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    Hi Bob - repost looks much better - can see some details in those whites. Looks sharp, Good HA and eye contact - the habitat does not bother me - its part of the story.
    Good show.
    Keep em coming :)

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    I like the repost, Bob, almost looks like a spotlight on him and that really minimizes the background. Good redo!

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