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    I took this last week at Cameron Prarie NWR south of Lake Charles, LA. Comments and critiques appreciated.

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    I like the pose and the fact that the image is close to eye level.
    A few quick fixes would be to do some sensor spot cleanup with the "spot healing" tool in PS. You could also go lighter on the birds white feathers I'm guessing.
    F/11 really shows off those dust bunnies. ;)

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    Thanks, Mike. I'll get the dust bunnies:D

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    Looks a little dark to me, and I might have put him a little more in the upper left of the frame.

    Beautiful bird, I like the wings and the HA.

    Hope you don't mind a repost with some levels adjustments and sharpening?

    Last edited by Colin Knight; 12-30-2009 at 09:08 PM.

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    This is a very nice wing position and I like it a lot, repost is a big improvement and I would also clone out the protruding part of the perch blocking tail feathers in lower left corner. TFS
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