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    A lot of patching, cloning, spray painting. My goal was to do it a little faster than my usual snail's pace. A good exercise. Added small detail preset which I don't think is entirely successful here but no more time to work on it, so here it is.

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    Original photo.

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    Jackie, Nice pp work. I might remove the small twig in front of the tail since you did such a great job w/ the clean up and smoothing. I love the BG color-it is very complimentary to the Chickadee. The small detail preset-was that in Topaz Clean? It looks good. I like the effect. I'm trying to get folks to post both B/A in one pane. Don't change this one but if you do another one. Dave P. had a good idea to put a smaller before so you could put a larger after.

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    Did my best D to put them one one window but just ran out of steam, yes the small details preset in Topaz Adjust 3.

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    Good one Jackie...ditto on removing one near tail..

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jackie Schuknecht View Post
    Did my best D to put them one one window but just ran out of steam, yes the small details preset in Topaz Adjust 3.
    Jackie, It's not a big deal about the one pane. No worries, I'm just glad you posted it.The Chickadees are my favorites and I really like the Topaz effect on them. Great job.

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    That is nice pp work, Jackie. Definitely get rid of that one branch covering his tail and you'll have an awesome Chickadee image!

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    Nice image and application, Jackie.

    Only comment has been made. ;)

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    Ditto the previous comments. Also, I love the way the treatment brought out all the feather detail.

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    Hi Jackie
    When I saw the first image I thought "Aha, she'll be removing that little broken branch and possibly sharpening the tail a bit" Wrong !! Surprise, surprise.
    Never guessed there was something above the bird and after several views no indication these branches were ever there,also the lower right distractions.
    I am really impressed and don't mind the little twig.
    Cheers: Ian Mc
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    Jackie, nice image as usual. I can relate to the time issues and it makes me appreciate this even more.

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    Thanks for the comments. Lots of work to get "clean" shots of these songbirds!

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    nice clean up Jackie. BG's can be more difficult than repairing an
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    I looked at this yesterday and something bothered me just a bit.
    The bird does not have his center of gravity over the perch, rather it is leaning backwards a bit(IMO)
    This is a 7º cw rotation.....whatcha think?

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    Methinks you are right, thanks. Don't know the ergonomics of bird perching yet. Was just a bad guess.

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    Jackie, a beautiful clean up job - I love chickadees:)
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    I'm really impressed with the 'cleanups' I've viewed this week.. I really have to develop some patience to do this myself someday. To my eyes, the added detail is just a bit much.. maybe somewhere in between? Really nice work Jackie :)

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