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    Default Gull Investigating Possible Meal

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    This gull took a single peck at the dead bird, then walked on. I like the dead black look in its eye. It fits the ghoulish behavior.

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    I'm a noob, so take my advice with a grain of salt.

    I was recently looking at a bear, bloodyly eating a salmon and the focus was on the eye of the dead fish. In that context, this image is also fitting in a "nature" forum or photo lineup. Still, give the unrecognizable form of the dead bird (without your description) it is not clear what's going on here by simply looking a the image. In the bear image that I referred to, there's no doubt what's going on. The need to explain weakins this image.

    I think it'd be useful to brighten the eye of the live gull and bring up his undershadows just a knotch or two.
    Last edited by David Stephens; 12-29-2009 at 08:28 PM.

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    Bill,

    To me it is pretty obvious its a bird, but what kind;) Kidding. You have some nice detail in the feathers of the gull and good head position and DOF..But I don't think dull, black eyes work. The image looks like it could use some umph, overcast skies maybe? Might try to lighten the image a bit and bump up the contrast.

    Interesting behavior image

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    Hi Bill,
    I like the captured action depicted here. The bird is a tad tight in frame for my taste, It also looks a little on the flat side. I would suggest opening up the area around the eye, and selective sharpening it. Would also set a black and white point. It needs a little saturation and contrast boost...looking forward to your next one...:cool:

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    Following some of Gus' useful suggestions, I've lightened and sharpened the eye, changed color balance a bit, and played a bit with curves.

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    Last edited by BillTyler; 01-01-2010 at 04:46 PM. Reason: Add image that I forgot to attach the first time

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    Default Finally with an attached image, I hope

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    Couldn't seem to get the image attached. Perhaps this one will work.

    Quote Originally Posted by BillTyler View Post
    Following some of Gus' useful suggestions, I've lightened and sharpened the eye, changed color balance a bit, and played a bit with curves.

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