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    I'm slowly making my way through the 10,000 images I recently made in Antarctica, and offer this one up for comment. Lately I seem to be drawn to these slightly "out of the box" images. A Chinstrap Penguin in a snowfield at Half Moon Island.

    I lightly cropped, ran Levels (Auto worked well), and sharpened.

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    I like it. The wide crop, high-key, pose and composition work really well. I might crop a bit off the top. Maybe something like this? I also toned down the highlights, they were partially overexposed.

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    This is very good, John. I like the way you have composed this with plenty of space around the bird. Wondering about a little more detail in the snow but am on a crummy monitor at work so it may actually be there and I just can't see it. Title is very appropriate.
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    I really love this shot, John. There are some stark environments out there and you've done well to capture one in context with a beautiful critter. Axel's repost is much more gentle on the eyes and brings the image home.

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    John:

    A strong and classic composition, with small in the image subject placed with the rule of thirds.

    I like the bird in the original, and snow between the two. I haven't been there, but suspect the snow is almost overpowering and featureless in some lighting.

    Look forward to more. I suspect that penguins work esp. well in this type of composition, because they are so simple from a graphic standpoint (B&W)

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    Cute bird and nice environment, challanging exposure. Whites just a bit hot in the original repost is a bit better. TFS
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    Very, very good job in this one John. I love the composition but I agree with Axel croping just a bit on the top. Light is fantastic and the textures of snow are really subtle but nice. Can wait to see more images from that trip :)

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    Hi john,

    A gorgeous shot here! Love the idea and apart from the crop you did very well here. If this were mine I would crop a bit of the right and top. Lovely exposure on the little guy and like the straigt look very much.

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    John; I remember this place, beautiful Half Moon, lots of Chinstraps!!!
    Image is great; I love it, excellent composition; gives the sense of being right there.
    Axel has a point, I see it a little bit overexposed.

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    John....one of the better images I have seen. Beautifully composed. Very artsy....will look great on a wall. Classic bird-in-habitat. Very well done.

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    Love the light and the pose but would like to have seen you point the lens a bit more to the left putting the bird even more into the corner.
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    Thanks for all the great comments. I think the image had the desired effect! I like Axel's repost and it really shows the colour difference between the snow (grey) and the Chinstrap (yellowish). I'll play around with a recrop.

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