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    Default Juvenile Red-tailed

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    Canon 40D, Tamron 200-500
    @375mm, 1/400, f8, ISO 400, Aperture Priority

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    Hi Allen,

    A beautiful young bird, very nicely exposed and I like the bg. A bit more sharpening and/or contrast might be beneficial, and I'd wish for just a little more room at the top if you have it.

    Real nice image,

    Kenn

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    I like the soft light, BG and eye contact and agree on more contrast, maybe saturation and a tad more sharpening. I might add a bit room top and left.

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    A red-tail that didn't fly away. Good for you !:)

    Good pose and like the whites ! Good background, too ! Agreed with others about the sharpness, color and contrast.

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    excellent shot, I like the birds pose, and head angle a lot, great look at those awesome talons!

    ... just a couple small tweaks... added canvas to the left, small levels adjustment for contrast, and sharpened a titch.. 1.5 minutes, and the cake is baked!

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    ps... the bg is killer.

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    Wow Raymond your redo looks great...thanks for doing this!

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    Agree with the above...I wonder what a smidge of CCW rotation would do?

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