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    Default Black Phoebe

    This fellow decided to pose for me in the morning.


    Black Phoebe
    Shoreline Lake, CA

    Canon 7D + 500L + 1.4x TC, tripod
    1/1600, f/8, ISO 800, Manual exposure
    Processed in LR + PS3, cloned out a couple of leaves sticking out behind the tail, cropped to mp and resized.

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    Luis:

    Sharp, well exposed, nice head angle, attractive background. I like being able to see some iris detail.

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    Excellent sharpness, pose and background. Agree with Randy on the detail in the eye.

    If it were mine, I would have removed the leaf over the tail and the resulting shadow caused by it.

    I find the OOF plant material in the background distracting.

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    Thanks Randy and Jim. Here is a repost based on your suggestions:

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    Very nice Luis, detail and exposure very good. I would be tempted to clone out the leaf that is blocking the tail and some of the OOF veggies. Nicely done.
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    I like the RP, nice pose, good light and BG...

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