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    Dear all
    Made this with D700 , 600mm, ISO 400, 1/2500, F 5.6 , tripod , cropped 70% of FF
    All C & C are most welcome and much appreciated
    Harshad

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    Harshad -

    Very nice. Exposure is good, composition is good, clean bg, etc. I like it.

    I would suggest that you may have a very slight yellow cast in the darks of this one (colors balanced well in highlights). I think that you could bring down the bg just a bit and increase contrast between the bird and bg. You might try a a Color Balance Layer and to the shadows only add about 4 or 5 points of to Blue and see what you think. This is just a suggestion of something to try as the image is very nice as is too.

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    Loved the light here bhai, nice details and I like the extra space around too..

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    Harshad...liked the shooting angle and the light angle. The composition as well. But there is something strange about the feather texture. I am not able to articulate that....there is a brush-strokes kinda look. Lets wait and see if others feel the same.

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    +1 to everything in Kaustubh's comment.

    Always a fan of a well defined catch light as in this.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kaustubh Deshpande View Post
    Harshad...liked the shooting angle and the light angle. The composition as well. But there is something strange about the feather texture. I am not able to articulate that....there is a brush-strokes kinda look. Lets wait and see if others feel the same.

    Nothing done to fethers here KD , :confused::confused:

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    I like the angle and relatively calm water. I wish the bird were angled toward you and since the reflection is not so great, I might crop some off the bottom. I would also tone down the whites more.

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    Harshad:

    Nicely presented. I do agree with others about a small crop up from the bottom.

    Cheers

    Randy

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    Harshad, I love the painterly feel to this. The water color is lovely. I like it alot. :)

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    On my monitor the exposure looks perfect. Whites are bright, but not overly so?

    Detail / sharpness looks perfect and I really enjoy the green background.

    Agree with those who have suggested cropping some from the bottom. I'd also take a little from the top balance it back out.

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    Hey HB - What a cool looking duck that I've never seen. The background on this one is awesome. I just love that green color.

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