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    Canon 30D
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    Exposure-1/800sec
    Aperture-f/8
    ISO-640

    All C&C more than welcome!
    Last edited by Josiah LaCelle; 12-21-2009 at 06:53 AM.

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    Josiah:

    Classic nuthatch pose, well exposed, sharp on the eye and head.

    Good use of the side light.

    I might try to down play the massiveness of the perch by reducing the brightness a bit, and might consider a small crop to help decrease the amount of perch showing, and decenter the bird a bit more.

    Thanks for sharing.

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    Josiah:

    I had a second, so reworked your image with the above changes.

    Small crop from left
    Lowered the exposure on trunk by 1/2 stop using a quick mask.

    I did notice as I was working on it, that there is a sharpening halo around the head.

    Just some options for you to consider. By the way, the maximum posting size is 1024 by 800. Your original was a bit bigger than that.

    Randy
    Last edited by Randy Stout; 12-20-2009 at 05:26 PM.

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    Josiah - I like the head angle, background and eye catch. Nicely captured. The perch is very prominent and detracts a bit from the bird. Personally, I would prefer to not see the rear end of the bird going out of focus - would prefer either head on or full in focus side view.

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    Pose and BG look good. I find the protruding branch underneath the bird distracting and the blacks in that area are blocked. I also wish for a bit more eye contact. Keep them coming!

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    You have received some good critique and suggestions from other here.

    The thing about nut hatches is they are often on a huge perch. You did well with the capture though.

    Keep clicking. I want to see more.

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    I call Randy's re-post and raise him one protruding branch less as per Axel's suggestion. Also did a Gaussian blur on the sort of mess in the urc.... Then added BLACK to the WHITES in Selective Color.
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    Thanks everyone for the comments and suggestions and thank you to Randy and Author for doing the repost's as well.

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