Thanks for the feedback. These are almost full frame shots, and the crane had just about flown out of the frame in the first post. I'll have to go back and add canvas to add room on the left. In the meantime, here is the shot two frames prior, where I still have room to leave for him to fly into.
The repost is 1000 times better. In the first frame, the bird is AA (angled away)--actually turned away from you. That is pretty much an image killer for me. I am surpised that nobody mentioned that. It is also the reason that the eye looks dark--the head is turned away from the light.
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That is indeed why the eye is dark. I had already lightened it as much as possible without it getting destructive. I really enjoy the full body flat to the plane presentation, but the head is turned out of the plane and kills the image. It would have been a much better shot if taken 1/10 of a second sooner!