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    Default Crane landing

    Afternoon shot at Bosque last week. The left underwing is dark, but in this case it helps the head stand out. Curious what people think.



    D3X with 600 lens. 1/1000 at f/5 EV -.3 (auto) iso 220

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    I like the light, sharpness and complementing BG and would give it a bit more room. I might try to lighten the underside of the far wing.

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    Underwing doesn't bother me, but I would slightly darken the entire image with a levels adjustment. That would bring out more saturation and contrast in the image.

    Nice comp, pose and details.

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    beautiful image this, loved the pose, nice light, good DOF and nice compo..

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    lovely pose , sharpness , details and light here with complimenting BG
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    I like the landing pose and the dark underwing doesn't bother me. Good sharpness, nice light, and a great background. Maybe add a bit more room on the left? Well done.

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    I made a few changes - added canvas on left and darkened it a bit:

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    That looks better, Allan.

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