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    Dear all
    Made this with D700 , 600mm , ISO 400, F6.3 , 1/2000 , tripod,
    removed distractiong branch in BG
    All C & C are most welcome and much appreciated
    Harshad

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    I like the look-back pose, composition and eye contact. I might tone down the highlights more and would probably remove the yellow spot above the head.

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    here is repost , I could not remove that yellow spot:o

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    Harshad....I like the simplicity of the perch and the pose / head turn.

    The subject is a bit soft...was this a large crop?

    The brightness of the perch is a bit distracting as are the bright yellow background objects adjacent to the subjects head.

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    Lovely clean image Harshadbhai, and I like the pose and HA. I like the comp as is, but can also see this as a vertical too.

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    I like the yellow circles in the BG :)
    Agree on toning down the perch and add some more sharpening. Compo OK with me.

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    Harshad, I too like the background and the simple perch. Is the bird moulting and growing in new tail feathers or is that normal to have different lengths of tail feathers?

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    Lovely image of this sharp little bird

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    Lovely Bhai, nice simple pose, perch and BG..

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