Pretty good sharpness, nice wing position, and nice eye contact. The bird could go a little brighter for my taste. There seems to be some compression artifacting around the head. And I would crop a bit off the right side of the frame.
I agree with Doug on this one. Crop from the right, brighten the bird a bit. In fact, I might even crop down from the top and add a bit to the left as well. Just personal taste,
I also think you sig line is very distracting. Way too big.
Jasper Pulaski sure is a fun place. Glad conditions were good for you.