I might have cropped out the small rock formation on the RB by cropping a little to the right of the next formation. I also might have cropped out the bottom to the first swirl in the center of the image, the density of the lower part does not seem to add to the rest of the swirl, for me. But...
Mark, If I crop out the small rock formation on the right-then I would eliminate most of the clouds,which I don't want to do. If I crop up from the bottom it would put my horizon in the center,which I don't want either.
Mark, To me this bottom crop has eliminated the feel of a long journey into the mountains-which I was going for. The right crop I could do but chose not to because I did like the cloud formation on the right and cropping that out would make it more of a square crop which I don't like since I'm not willing to crop from the bottom. Those are just my thoughts.
interesting concept....maybe an oval or polygon crop :D
I see Mark's idea, but the horizon positioned centrally doesn't work for me.
Only possible enhancement might be more Red Rock color in the foreground swirl
I see where your coming from with the long journey idea...but agree with Dave, Mark, 50/50 crop doesn't work...but a great starting point...tweak it some more...TFS