This one looks better than the previous one, I like the takeoff pose, sharpness and only wish for more head turn. If you have, maybe a bit more room all around.
agree with you axel.tough when shooting from the boardwalk with all the other distracting artefacts but i am trying.when i grow up i want to be a photographer like you!
I like the wing position. However, it needs more room at top and I wish the bright reflections in the water around the head and beak were toned down or eliminated.
This image looks nice and sharp. I like the upward wings and the trailing feet in the water. The exposure looks very good. This needs some more room, esp at the top and left.