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    Default Pryor Mountain Wild Stallion

    Taken last June at the Pryor Mountain Wild Horse Management Area in Montana. Converted to B&W with a tint and vignette applied.

    D300 with 80-400mm @ 400mm, 1/2000, f/8, iso 400, ev -0.67

    Last edited by david cramer; 11-25-2009 at 08:06 AM.

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    David, I'm not seeing an image.

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    Smugmug must have been asleep. I'm seeing it now.

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    I'm still not getting it.

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    Hopefully I've fixed it.

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    David, I like the old photo feel to this. The vignette adds a nice touch IMO. There a a couple of smudges in the BG (above the horses rear-very very minor)but I would smooth them out before print. Very nicely done.
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    Love the old photo look to this, David! Excellent effects and toning. Like the pose too. Personally I would prefer a little more room on the right because the horse looks too centered as it is IMO.
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    Hi David,
    I too love the old-world feel to this and the toning is perfect. Like Christopher, I think that I might add a little canvas to the right and see how it looks.
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    I agree with a bit more canvas on right. I would also have liked the body position to be tilted a bit more towards the camera (think HA in Avian) so it doesn't feel like I'm missing the eye contact with the animal.

    Very much like your toning and vignette - could possibly blend the transition on the vignette just a little more. Love the strength and muscle tone that shows in the animal. Nicely captured!

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