I love the way the light just catches the Bittern. I think the pano crop works well here. A bit more eye contact would be nice. And I would remove the light gray twig in front of the bird.
The spot-lit effect is super; right on the face. I would lose the sharply focused grass behind the bird and wish for a better head turn. They surely are beautiful birds.
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HA mentioned, but also love the fall of light here and knowing how shy our little bittern is I can only compliment you on getting him out in the open...