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    Canon 40D, 1/50 sec, f/11, flash fired. ISO 400, 100-400L

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    Alfred Forns
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    I like it Bill Does have a Certain appeal MIght like it even better without the top branch You have a good creative vision !!!!

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    Robert O'Toole
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    Hey cool idea, I like this one Bill, The design and composition are very cool. Maybe a little sharpening would imporove it.

    Robert

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    yes, i think it needs a little sharpening too. If you remove the top branch perhaps extend the top and left canvas just slightly to make the leaf a bit smaller in the frame?

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    Hi Bill,

    I like the idea behind this and think it might have worked better (more dramatically) in black and white and like others suggested without the top branch.
    I do feel there is something strange going on with the colours and sharpness of the current image perhaps due to post-processing.

    Greetings,

    Jeroen Stel

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    Very unique Bill - I like it!!
    Agree that the composition would be enhanced with removal of top branch.

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    Mike Moats
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    Hey Bill, another real nice idea. This is a real nice comp and interesting image, I would agree the top right branch isn't adding any thing, so to simplify the image I would clone it out.

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