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    Hi Everyone!
    Here is another image from my trip to Nickerson with Artie last August.
    Canon 50D 500 f/4 + 1.4 TC
    f/5.6 1/1600
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    I was trying for a very washed-out, ethereal, painterly look ...:D
    Your comments and critiques are very much appreciated.
    Best regards to all,
    Nicki
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    I like the composition, angle and pose. The high-key exposure is interesting but I would probably take the midtones down a tad.

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    Hi Nicki...

    Is the beach substrate really that white at Nickerson? (never been there).

    I understand what you were trying to do here, but it looks a bit too sorta washed out. I agree with Axel that the midtones should be dropped a bit.

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    Nicki, I think you achieved the look you were after and I like it. It appeals to the artistic side of me. I love the pose and the BG.

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    Hi Axel, Jim and Denise and thank you so much for your comments.
    Jim, I went back to the raw file to check the colour of the sand and it doesn't look too different. I did clean it up a bit with the patch tool just to smooth it out. I do remember it as being very white!
    Axel, my only concern with taking down the mid tones is that I might lose the soft look that I was after.
    BTW, this looks great printed on high quality watercolour type paper - I suspect that it does not look its best as a projected image!
    Best regards,
    Nicki

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    Hi Nicki, I like this image. Lets see you said you were trying to produce an image that was: very washed-out, ethereal, painterly look (Washout-Check: Ethereal-Check: Painterly look-Check). Combined with a pleasing composition and pose it is my opinion that you achieved your goals and produced a pleasing image. My only suggestion is that for a Web presentation that you place a thin black border on the image so the edge doesn't get lost on the sites white back ground. Thanks for sharing.

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    lovely pose and killer BG
    TFS

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    Thank you Phil and Harshad - mission accomplished!!
    Best,
    Nicki

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    loved the paintimg effect here... great expo.. congrats..

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