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    Default Black-bellied Plover

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    Canon 40D
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    1/100 sec. at f/5.6
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    approx. 20 minutes after sunrise.

    I added canvas to the bottom. I didn't clip the feet but I had to add room at the bottom-Does it look ok? If not where and why -please Thankyou I appreciate the feedback.:)

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    thats just perfect to work with. expo is jst bang on really tuff situation to handle as everywhere white.. you done it fantastic. congrats.

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    Hi Denise, there's two ways of looking at the bottom of the image.

    a) leave your added canvas as is - it gives a DOF effect.

    b) clone in the sand over the area you added, as I have done. Make sure you dont copy or repeat areas. In hindsight, I should have maybe added a tad more to the bottom. Apologies went over your signature.

    I like the soft light, and overall, pretty sharp detail. Love the pastel colours of the BG too.

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    Love your shots Denise. My first thought was to blend a slither at about 50% opacity so as not to make the oof so defined... (sounds sort of contradictory that does, :D), but hope you know what I mean. Fabulous shot either way.

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    We got luckier with feet here :)
    I like Stu's version repeating the sand pattern rather than the OOF sand.
    You could try and warm up the temp a bit?

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    Thanks guys and Fabs for the suggestions. I tried to incorporate all of your suggestions. I added a tiny bit of canvas and cloned in more sand-I also tried to blend the area as suggested by David. I also warmed it up a bit.
    Last edited by denise ippolito; 11-03-2009 at 01:21 PM.

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    Denise...liked your last repost the most. You are really good at this kind of shooting. Hats off. A very very pretty image.

    KD

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    I like repost with slight warming of bird.
    Also this ground level type shot is great .

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    Like your final repost a lot. That little bit of warming really added punch
    Cheers
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    another wonderful image Denise , your last repost rocks
    TFS

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    Very nice and healthy looking shorebird Denise.

    Your repost looks better to me but I still prefer Stuart's foreground.
    BG is great.

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    I really enjoy your posts Denise. The colours in this photo are fantastic and although at first my eyes were not immediately drawn to the foreground I do find it distracting now I notice it and I like what Stuart did with cloning the sand. These little guys are very photogenic and this photo makes me eager to improve my own technique and abilities.

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    Great belly crawlin shot Denise! Your repost rocks but I wasn't complaining about the original either!

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    Thankyou all for taking the time to comment.Much appreciated.

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    The repost is just right. I love the look on the bird and the foot position,
    as if the bird is sneaking up on you. Very nice image...

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    your last post is right on, beautiful shot Denise

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    Ilija and Raymond, Thankyou both for looking in. I appreciate it very much.

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    Great repost deniseji, loved the angle, looks like a painting. nice details and pose too.. the repost works well, congrats...

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    Thankyou Kiran, I appreciate it.

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    Beautiful shot Denise I love the pose colors and detail the Plover really looks nice against that bg.

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    James, Thankyou very much for taking the time to comment. I appreciate it.

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