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    I revisited my tern files, and thought I would share this one with you. Taken at the coast a few months ago.

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    Hand Held from the beach.

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    Stuart, nice sharpness, comp, and exposure looks good.

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    What a shot!!! Mindblowing

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    Hi Stuart,
    I love the way in which the tern seemings to be surfing along on the breeze. Beautiful feather details. Does the eye look a little bright?
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    beautiful image withnice expo and compo , eye mentioned
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    Beautiful sharpness and details.The eye does look a bit bright. I love the gradient BG colors. Nicely framed.

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    Beautiful tern image, Stuart. The angles are incredible on this one. Only thought I had was maybe find a way to blend the bottom of the BG just a bit with the center so it was more gradual instead of it being a band at the bottom. Maybe a 50% clone between the two colors?

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    I really like the pose,details and the blue bg!

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    Thank you all so much for the great feedback. Here is a version removing the sea at the bottom, and darkening the eye.

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    I liked the sea at the bottom :) It seemed like a gradient, and gave depth, dang. Very sharp and great EXP.

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    Stuart, I like the bottom color also. It gave some interest. Beautiful sharpness.Can't comment on the eye-since I'm not sure. Love it!

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    Me, too--I liked the sea at the bottom. Super sharp with great detail.

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    Much prefer the sea at the bottom as in the original post. My big problem here is again one that nobody has mentioned; the bird's head is turned slightly away....

    What species is this, or is it Sterna anotheri???
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    I agree about keeping the strip of ocean on bottom.
    Lovely bird and wings. Agree about the head angle been a few degrees away.

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    Thank you all for the different opinions regarding the sea.

    Artie, This is a swift Tern. The only tern that has a full yellow beak.

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    Fantastic shot Stuart love everything about well done...

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    I too prefer the OP, nice details, light and pose.... congrats..

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    Very beautiful Stuart, love the HA, wing position, BG, if you wanna be picky there is some grain on the darker feather but overall excellent. TFS
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    Thanks Stuart for the species ID.
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    James, Kiran, Arash, thanks for your great feedback.

    Artie, in your own words - YAW.

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