Today 2-13-08 at 8:02am, Canon 40D, 100-400L at 235mm
ISO 640, 1/125. f5.0, +.33 EV, Partial Metering, Cloudy WB setting
Flash used compulsory mode because of deep overcast conditions!
Bill....
This guy sure fills the frame........maybe a little too much. I'd give him a little more room if you had it. The tones of the pelican certainly stand out from the pretty green BG. I might back off of the sharpening to give him a softer look....you might get a painterly look out of it.
Hey Bill,
Exposure looks good. Seems a little tight in the frame, especially the bottom and maybe in front.
Some might say the bg is too busy, but I like it
Bill, it's a bit too contrasty for me. I really love the plumage details on this species in softer light. I find that with sun and flash, it is just tougher to do.
You have nice eye contact. In these cases, if the birds profile is a few degrees towards you and you focus on the eye, the beak will be in focus too. In this image the beak is not critically focuses like the eye since he is turned more then a few degrees towards you. That is not a problem here - I am just elaborating on the process of fine-tuning this head-angle thing.
I like the detail in the feathers. Other comments on contrast and room in the frame are on target. You are posting better and better images. Good work.
Brown Pelican on Perch
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