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    Red Rumped Swallow (Hirundo daurica)

    Shor near Harohalli, Bangalore Outskirts, India

    Gear : Canon40D, CanonEF 500 f/4 + 1.4E

    This image was shot from Car. Critics & Comments are most welcome



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    Great detail and exposure here. Love the eye contact. I'm guessing others will say the image is too tight on the sides, but looks fine for this pose to me.

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    Tanks for commenting Dave. This bird came so close that I had very less opportunity for composing this image in horizontal way :-)

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    nice colors, detail, EXP and BG. perch is not that attractive and HA could be better. you can also clean up the dust spot and the strands (spider web?)
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    Lovely shot Subramanya. Like the IQ and the way the head is tilted although could be a tad more. Quite like the cobweb strands as adding interest.

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    Nice clarity, color, and BG in this image. I like the web strand but would remove the one that seems to be floating without attachments. Also would give it a slight CCW turn.

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