Hi Michael The secret for these is soft light ... about the only way to come out on top !!! Here there is a bit of a shadow in the bird's head, getting in sun angle would solve the problem.
Exposure is as good as you can do, whites are in check but black in wing has no detail. Pose wise this is very close to perfect, ideally you want to catch the bird in the full up position !!! ... did you crop to a vertical or is it natural .. I work hard on them verticals :)
PS wise there is a little halo around the upper part of the wing, all other processing looks good and you did manage a discernible eye ... big deal in these guys !!!!
Great post Michael. Good advice from Al. Guess you couldn't have used flash at that speed. I think it is really hard to photograph black and white birds.
Al hit the techs, good advise. In any high action shot, it is really best effort and a touch of luck. I use high speed shutter and try to get a good one in a controlled batch. Moreover, I get in best position for light and background to support the shot I want and go from there - not bad - keep em coming.
Agree with the advice given, soft light with good sun position, usually with behind your back and lots of practice. Love the wing up position so we can see the underwing details, the ripple in the wave add to the image except the one blocking the beak.