Nice stretch (although I usually prefer when the near wing is being stretched). A lower angle if possible would have worked well here, I would eliminate the smaller reddish catchlight, and would tone down the BG waveline coming out of the bird's forehead. As posted sharpness looks perfect, and the pale blue water looks great against the light brown/tan hues.
Jim - what's the date on this? The bird's in really great juvenile plumage with those black subterminal bars. And it's another good candidate for 'name the feather tract'...
Nice one Jim but Dan is too, too smart. He stole my critique word for word. Where exactly?
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ps: Light a bit harsh and contrast a bit too high.
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Love it Jim! Exceptional work IMO. In a perfect world the wing, yes as said, and maybe the head would also be another 0.0356 degrees more turned towards you :D but to the majority of mankind this would be an awesome image from all aspects despite those technical observations. I do agree with removing the reddish catchlight. The BG looks wonderful! :)
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Very nice, with good critique by Daniel. I might be tempted to clone out about an inch of the wave that intersects the head, but leave the rest because of the repeating lines with the other waves and beach. Perhaps that is what Daniel was implying?