HI Michael Neat looking bird and like the capture, would lighten the reflection and work on the eye. Catchlight seems very large.
For these is best to focus on the eye itself to make it sharp, seems the sharpest part is around the shoulder. I normally feel your better with a sharp eye and area around it !!! .. ID wise looks like it !!!
I like your repost. A sharp eye is a very big plus in an image. I also like the little fluffed look. Wish the reflection's back is not so hunched due to the water ripple.