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    Looks like chicken to me! You got the eye nice and sharp. I wish the bird had been flying towards you. And I'd like to see a bit more detail in the darks; perhaps a little Shadows/Highlights work. I might also remove the white area in the URC.
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    Doug is pretty spot on with his critique. Id also tone down the white band on the rump and add some more room all around as it feels to tight. Good job on catching the action and getting the head in focus.

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    I forgot to mention toning down the whites on the rump.
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    Great critique above. I got the chicks doing that in the summer. This is the banded one. When did you get it?

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    lovely pose and cool bird , agreed with Doug here
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    viera this weekend

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