I like the interaction, exposure, and details. I would go for more room on top, and try toning down the foreheads a tad. I also might lighten the irises of the eyes a bit, it would help them pop more.
I agree with Aidans comments and would add that darkening the BG some would really make the birds pop. Love the concentration on whatever it is that they are looking at. What is it bye the way? Congrats
That's not much of a gift Good to see you posting here. I love the interaction and the sharpness. The BKGR BOKEH looks a bit weird.
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Ah, I missed that. It very well could be. You know I did not like you using that set-up! In this very instance had you used the 70-200 at 200 with the 1.4 you would have been at 280mm and the results would have been much, much better for several reasons....
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